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BEFORE: On September 28, 1970, at Sacred Heart Hospital in Chester, Pennsylvania, Kevin “Rock” Oropeza, thrived his way into the world to a 20 year old drug addicted mother while his 22 years old father was at a party with the president of the Pagan Motorcycle Clubhouse. A hyperactive child, at the age of three years old and controlled with the use of pot administered by his father; a decision that would alter Kevin‘s mind body and spirit sentencing him to a life of endless struggles. On November 18, 1992 , Kevin Oropeza was sentenced to natural life without parole for murder and conspiracy in the first- degree for the…